WE GIVE A COMPANY HOW TO INTERVIEW
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Good morning Sir
I am glad to be
here for this interview. First, let me thank you for finding time in the midst
of pressing affairs. I am 25 years old and I am local.
I am seeking an
opportunity to work with *** as Sales. My professional experience and my
awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your
company.
I have a
bachelor degree with a major in Mechanical and Electrical field. Graduated from
the *** university in 2002. Over the past three years, I have worked with ***
Co.,Ltd as Sales who responsible for the market of Hunan mainly. During this
period, I have learnt much I learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how
to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to
balance my time and priorities. Additional experience in other fields such as
graduation practice in factory and commercial negotiation also reinforces my
value to your company.
I enjoy
thinking, enjoy learning, enjoy working, able to bear work pressure.
In my free time,
I often participate a lot of activities, such as table tennis?badminton, those
can help me regulate my personal state.
I am expecting
to become your colleague on some day. Because being offhand in advance, let’s leave it at
that.
Thanks
Reply
amining:
Although the
interview have gone, You can also give me some suggestion with my
self-introduce, there is no time limit for this. Perhaps I can use it for the
next one. come on, sir. thank you first.
Reply
nona the brit:
Ok. However,
this is difficult as there are big differences in what constitutes good manners
or an appropriate way of expressing yourself in different cultures, so bear
this in mind and tailor your little speech for your audience.
Good morning
Sir, (What will you say if it is a woman?)
I am glad to be
here for this interview. First, let me thank you for finding time in the midst
of pressing affairs.
I am 25 years
old and I am local. (I live locally sounds better)
I am seeking an
opportunity to work with *** as Sales. (..IN sales or As a Sales
representative/whatever).My professional experience and my awareness of your
unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company.
I have a
bachelor degree with a major in Mechanical and Electrical field.Graduated from
the *** university in 2002. Over the past three years, I have worked with ***
Co.,Ltd as Sales (again, in sales or as a sales man/person/rep?) who
responsible (with responsibility mainly) for the market of Hunan. During this
period, I have learnt much(.) I learned the values of teamwork and commitment,
how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to
balance my time and priorities. Additional experience in other fields such as
graduation practice in factory and commercial negotiation also reinforces my
value to your company.
I enjoy
thinking, enjoy learning, enjoy working, (and I am )able to bear work pressure.
In my free time,
I often participate (in) activities such as table tennis (and) badminton.
I am expecting
to become your colleague on some day. (More tactful to say 'I would love to
become you colleague/join the company)
Because being
offhand in advance, let’s
leave it at that. (This sentence makes no sense. 'Being offhand' means to be
rude, inconsiderate, ill-mannered so I don't think that is whay you mean! In
advance of what? 'Let's leave it at that' is a command, it sounds rather abrupt
and ill-mannered to me, again I don't think this is what you meant. How about
'I would love to join your company and you would not regret giving me this
opportunity.' and just finish with a smile!
Thanks
Reply
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